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Comic Blurb: 'Atta girl.

Edit (1-30-15): In some ways, I regret going in this direction. Maybe she could've been mugged on the way there instead? The key here was to shake her up in some way, and while this is still better than my original plan (no I won't say), attempted rape probably wasn't the way to go. I've never gotten any complaints about this plot point at this part, but it's still eaten away at me. This is why I went so silly in chapter 2 (even though that wasn't the original intent).

At the end of the day, I wanted to make this comic more than a bunch of drunk/random nudity jokes (Sam hasn't been drunk since this arc if you hadn't noticed) (one swig of Jack Daniels non-withstanding). I wanted to take some risks with the storyline, and maybe this wasn't the right choice for my first twist, but I wanted to really let these characters develop in some way, and at the time this seemed like a good idea. I still stand by the rest of this chapter, just not these three comics. If he had tried to say, kidnap her, and that's why he was trying to grab her, or something else. Hindsight's 20/20 as they say, and I won't beat myself up for this, but I figured I'd use this space to vent a bit.


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